Test Layout Prototype

Advice and criticism welcome!!

This is a early prototype layout for Phase II of my project.  There are a number of things to be changed, such as making the marble bars thinner, smaller gem at the top.   I also know that the background and character image do not 'match', making her look like she floats.  A friend recommend to remove rounded corners from image to look cleaner and switch white over dark for the tidbit box.   All advice welcome!

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